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All Deviations
All Deviations


Cold in my Heart

The cold in my heart..
No matter what I did
It still was cold
Oh so cold.
Once it was warm
From love.
She made me happy.
But then she died.
Couldn’t protect her.
Felt the cold creep in my heart.
Leaving me emotionless.
More dead than alive.
Felt so lonely.
Felt so guiltily
My life would never be the same again.
Oh so cold.
My heart felt so cold.
No more warm.
Only cold.
Felt like forever.
No matter what I did.
It still was cold.
Thought it would be forever.
Until she came.
With her warm heart
She warmed up my cold heart
With her love
Oh so warm
Once my heart was cold
No more.
She made me feel loved
Making me feel alive.
I love her.
My heart is warm
Oh so warm.
Thank you Rebel.
I will always love you
Thank you.
I will always be yours.
©2007-2008 ~MrKaosX
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Finally after so long time. ^^;

Rebel belongs to :iconfurious-cat:

Chess @ :iconmrkaosx:
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*Furious-Cat:iconFurious-Cat: Oct 2, 2007, 2:07:29 PM
Good that Chess is warmed up from inside again...cute poem <3

Rebel: -^ ^-
~MrKaosX:iconMrKaosX: Oct 2, 2007, 2:10:20 PM
Yes it is good.. Rebel means alot for Chess.

thanks ^_^

Chess: <3

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Don't worry about me. I'm just watching.

Iron: Hey Buddy. You got something in your eye! Oh my bad it is just my claw! :evillaugh:
~DemonFlyBoy:iconDemonFlyBoy: Oct 2, 2007, 2:22:21 PM
Cute little poem there. You're quite the poet.
*corpsekitty64:iconcorpsekitty64: Oct 2, 2007, 5:15:28 PM
oooh~ I couldn't help but smile lots at the end :>

very nice poem, you writing is always so cool!:D

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~MrKaosX:iconMrKaosX: Oct 2, 2007, 10:04:18 PM
thank you for your kind words. ^^
it was abit hard to do this.. in fact i changed the end at least 3 times. ^^;

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Don't worry about me. I'm just watching.

Iron: Hey Buddy. You got something in your eye! Oh my bad it is just my claw! :evillaugh:
~MrKaosX:iconMrKaosX: Oct 2, 2007, 10:04:46 PM
thank you. ^^

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Don't worry about me. I'm just watching.

Iron: Hey Buddy. You got something in your eye! Oh my bad it is just my claw! :evillaugh: